The cobble-stoned street
was littered with last night’s celebrations. Streamers, party favors, and
broken glass still had yet to be cleaned up. Meanwhile, Jean was sitting at a
table, just finishing her order of a spinach and cheese omelet and decaf coffee,
no foam. She looked upward, her cat eye Gucci sunglasses sliding off the bridge
of her nose and pushing towards her forehead. The eggshell blue of the Venetian
sky was dotted with the black outline of seagulls from the bay. This sight
reminded her of one of her favorite songs, This
Is the Life, by one of her favorite bands, Two Door Cinema Club. Being on
vacation from school (a normal custom in Europe to go on a three week vacation
every couple of months) was a gift from above. Jean knew that even with her workaholic
parents and their crumbling marriage and her almost nonexistent social life,
nothing could change the fact that this was starting out as one of the best days
she had in a long while. She trusted that everything would work itself out.
However,
as soon as she came to this conclusion, she heard screams and sounds of
buildings crashing. Jean thought that there was no construction that day, and
was pulled out of her philosophical trance by curiosity. She closed her book
and saw a huge ocean liner coming toward the quaint bistro she was sitting at. She could tell that even with her mighty
engines in reverse, the ocean liner was pulled further and further into the
canal. Knowing that she didn’t have much time to get away, she quickly
gathered all of her things into her purse and started to run. Jean tripped on a
shaking cobblestone and tried to get up, realizing that her new jeans had
ripped and a long, bloody gash was appearing on her knee. People flooded the
streets, fleeing from the destruction. They created a hole around her, enough
room that she could get up and continue to her mint green Vespa. She grabbed
the shiny black helmet and sped away, knowing that the trouble had only just
started.
So fetch.
ReplyDeleteI loved the line "Jean thought that there was no construction that day, and was pulled out of her philosophical trance by curiosity. " I really want to learn more to this story, as I'm wondering how on earth an ocean liner got into the streets of Venice, and why it did! I liked the characterization you gave Jean with her parents working a lot and what kind of music she likes. I also love the description of Jean's breakfast and the streets of Venice.
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ReplyDeleteThe piece has such delicious details. "The eggshell blue of the Venetian sky was dotted with the black outline of seagulls from the bay." Just yum. I love the way you hint to a story beyond this. I could see this turning into something more.
ReplyDeleteI agree with Taylor about your use of details--you totally capture the European/Venetian vibe, right down to the "mint green Vespa." Nice!
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