Walking
up the hill covered in snow my footprints discolor the pure, white snow and
leave it
dirty,
something of a disgrace I’m sure to nature.
Walking
up the hill, I look around me as I see others leaving the factory, wages in
their pockets or tin boxes of only 5 cents.
End of the Day |
Walking
up the hill, I think of all the ugly houses lining the road, celebrating our victory
march of poverty and despair and ruin.
Walking
up the hill, I see other haggard faces with coal and dust etched into their
wrinkles greet their families and silently tell their wives that there’s no
more money for food.
Walking
up the hill, my shadow is slowly illuminated by the shy sun that is trying to
peak out from behind the salt and pepper colored clouds
Walking
up the hill, I think of my own family and what I will tell them when I get
home,
things
like sorrow and pain turned into my own gain.
Stopping
at the top of the hill, I pray for freedom and the end of the day.
I like your use of repetition...that particular phrase over and over emphasizes the slow trudge of the work weary. I also like the clouds described as "salt and pepper colored."
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